Dog on a Cold Stone Floor

The creative writing class I teach at the community center meets every other Thursday at 7 p.m. Anything goes, I say. Poetry, short stories, a screenplay; write whatever you like, and we’ll work to improve it. The students vary in age from teenagers to octogenarians.

Recently, Lucas, 20, submitted a one-act play called Dog on a Cold Stone Floor. The play, set in Harlem, is an inversion of Cat on a Hot Tin Roof. Li’l Daddy and Li’l Mama live in a two-bedroom apartment with their son Pebble and his wife, “Maggie the Dog.” They all love each other, communicate openly, and enjoy perfect health and happiness.

When I told Lucas I liked his idea, the inversion, but felt a one-off joke better suited his premise than a full-fledged one-act, he scratched his earlobe and said, “Huh?”

“Tennessee Williams,” I said.

“Who?”

“Cat on a hot tin roof,” I said.

“Huh?”

It’s been a few days and I keep thinking, is this possible?

Robert McEvily

Robert McEvily is a writer and multidisciplinary creative who publishes short fiction, humor, essays, cultural commentary, drawings, photography, and video. He’s the Creator and Editor of Six Sentences (Est. 2006), and hopes you’ll share your work.

https://www.robertmcevily.com/
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